User blog comment:YourFavoriteSalmon/Demons Among Us (User RP)/@comment-7173140-20160720030458

(here's a starting paragraph to go off of)

Rafael was up late, trying to perfect his muscles, as he worked out alone in the gym. "Rafael it's midnight, we have to get up tomorrow! Rafael, you're nuts, it's too late to work out" His friends had said to him. Oh but Rafael didn't listen, did he now.

"Well well, if isn't Rafael LaTompsa." A tall man in a dark coat said. "Yea, who's asking?" Rafael asked. "That'd be for me to know and for you to find out." Rafael distrusted the man, but asked anyways "Alright, what do you want?"

"How would you like to be immortal, never die?" Rafael began to think on it, as the man began to smile. "Yea, sounds cool." Rafael responded. "Just sign this then, and we'll be good." Rafael, being the dumb jock he was, signed it.

A clawing pain filled through Rafael's chest. "What... are you doing..." He asked in pain. "You sold your soul my friend. You won't have much need for this body anymore... you're a demon now." The last thing Rafael saw was a blade entering through his chest, before his physical form was no more.