Thread:Yui Nii-san/@comment-5082922-20130924083428

Hey Luka!

I am now done with the Cleaning Part 2. I looked through every single tribute of yours, and I had to alter stuff at '''every single page. Now, there's no more infoboxes '''on any of your pages. This took '''FOREVER. '''Like, hours. But you can finally consider yourself "cleaned" at that point. I have a few comments, both for just pages in general and some specific comments for specific pages.

Some character-use Improvements
Remember your use of signs proberly. Specifically ":" "" and capital letters. It's fine to make some mistakes, but too many of them will make the page seemed stressed and of poor'er' quality. Here are some general rules:

"Personality: Blah Blah Blah"

"Backstory: Blah Blah Blah"

A ":" is not used "Backstory : Blah Blah ".

A ":" has a space after it, but there is none before it.

"Personality: Nice (sometimes)."

"Personality: Angry (not always)."

A "" is not used: "Personality: Angry ( not always ) . There are no spaces.

A parantese does not have any spaces between the words inside. Only on the outside, there is spaces.

"Catelyn Bailey Tully"  

"The Hunger Games"

"Maybe I haven't done that. Should I do so?"

Capital letters are not used: "She went to the kitchen, To get a knife."

Capital letters are usually only used in names, titles and after a period, and of course when someone writes "I". 