User blog comment:PerniciousFabrication/The 249th Hunger Games/@comment-26904653-20160625182508

So i've posted the first reaping. and as this is my first time sharing my writing with others, I would like some feedback

What do you think of the...

1. Length, I feel as though it's a little on the short side, and I could have added more detail

2. Pacing, I feel like it moves very fast in some places, but unnecessacarily slow in others

3. Format, I really have no opinion on this, just whatever is easiest for y'all to read

Please be honest, im really looking for honest criticisms here, and will likely edit this point of view based on them, as well as keeping them in mind when writing further