User blog comment:PerniciousFabrication/The 249th Hunger Games/@comment-26904653-20160625182508/@comment-25924729-20160627111919

This is genuinely good, and arguably one of the best POVs in any games i've read so far. Yes, the beginning was kinda slow, and the ending very fast, but overall it was a really entertaining read. The length is much longer than most POVs people tend to write, but eh... more reading = more fun. Plus, like i said earlier, the writing quality is great, and i can see the sheer work and attention put into this.

Seiko was perfect. You captured the shy, conservative side of her personality really well, and even (i'm not sure if this is intentional) managed to hint at her over-attachment indirectly (constantly worrying and checking for her family). I also love that you included her token and minor characters related to her. The only gripe i have is that Pria is also a teenager, not Seiko's mother or anything. XD But i never specified that, so you wouldn't know and i can't complain.

All in all, this is really good writing, and i'm excited to see more of your work. :)