User blog comment:PerniciousFabrication/The 249th Hunger Games/@comment-26904653-20160629053124

Second reaping is up, and as last time, I would like some feedback

What do you think of the...

1. Length, it's a little shorter than the last one, but I feel still in the appropriate range

2. Pacing, I tried to keep up the pace, while also keeping it steady, but I really can't tell how it turned out

3. Format, I really have no opinion on this, just whatever is easiest for y'all to read

4. Specfically for Xax, how did I portray Cauter, was it good, bad, how could I change it in the future