Talk:The 475th Hunger Games: Dark, Darker, Yet Darker/@comment-24692847-20160707195937

I love the writing so far, and especially loved Talia and Sabrina's POVs. I absolutely loved how you incorporated Louise into Sabrina's POV, and how you incorporated Talia's artistic talents and her sick mother in her POV. Ultimately, I was extremely pleased with your portrayal of both my tributes.

Sabrina: It appears as if all the Careers have gotten themselves lost for chasing a tribute. Fortunately, Caboose and Genevieve are guarding the cornucopia, so all you have to do is find them. I believe that you have your chakrams, so try to find your way throughout the new arena, doing your best to ignore whatever hallucinations come. Immediately, when the day starts, I want you to cut the palm of your hand, then bandage it up. Whenever you start seeing a hallucination of someone from your life, put pressure on your wound, reminding you that it's just a hallucination. Use the pain from your palm to ground you to the reality of you being in the Hunger Games. Try to avoid attacking another tribute during the day, but if someone clearly tries attacking your alliance, help defend. You're a strong tribute, but you need to make it your priority to get back to your supplies at the cornucopia. So far, you've impressed me, Sabrina! Keep it up!

Talia: I don't know what happened to the building you were staying in, but if it's being changed into trees, then use it to your advantage. If you were able to find medical supplies in a building, you could find a variety of plants and leaves that could help with your camouflaging. Never eat any of the leaves or berries, as they may be poisonous, and rely on whatever was in Grant's backpack to feed you. Depending on wherever you are, find some sort of supplies to create some paints for camouflaging. It could be anything from a dandelion to a pen. If you can't find anything safe to camouflage yourself with, spend the day hiding and avoiding tributes. I don't know if you'll be mentioned at all today, since you're a loner and had a POV the previous day. If you are mentioned, just don't have it be because a tribute is hunting you down. Good job so far, Talia! Keep it up!