Thread:Yui Nii-san/@comment-5082922-20130924085006

There were also some specific comments to some of your tribute pages which I had to make. Here they are:

Liv and Asher Magnum
You had written the two informations boxes seperately however you wrote the personality for both of them. Because of that, I wasn't sure how to lay-out it, you might want to have a look at it. Liv_and_Asher_Magnum

Dawn Angelfrost
In Dawn's games describtion you claim that Tobi99 revealed that Dawn was one of the three possible victors. However, I have talked with Tobi (I am on skype with her) and looked through the comments and I didn't see anything saying that. So I deleted it. If you can proof where Tobi99 claims that Dawn was one of the three possible victors, we can always re-add it (If you can find it, I would be very happy since I could add that to Detria's page XD). Dawn Angelfrost

Hermia Lilaris
All here is that you might want to re-do Hermia's lunaii, since the background is non-transparent.

Jone Sapphire
Two things. One, you might want to make him a lunaii. Second, I would actually recorment you to splidt Jone into two tributes, since you have so detailed backstories for both him as a District 4 and a District 10'er. However, this is totally your own choice.

Ruby Corona
In her backstory, you mention that she wants to escape to Albion. I had to change this to "She wants to escape the arena" because: 1 Albion is gone. Forgotten. No one uses it, it hasn't been used in a year and it doesn't exist as anything but an old reference to this wiki anymore. 2 The country is proberty of John's (Poptart). He allowed users as Andrew (Mysims) and The Epic Hobo (Sapphire) to use it however he might not allow others to use it. 3 By saying that, you sorta force the game-writer into making Albion into their games, even if they don't wish Albion to be in their games.

If you really wish Albion to be on Ruby's page you can re-add it. But please consider the reasons I wrote up here. The authors of the newer games may not even know the country and John may not even be happy with letting other people use it. 