User blog comment:PerniciousFabrication/The 249th Hunger Games/@comment-26904653-20160625182508/@comment-24561298-20160625194904

Look, Imma be honest sith you, you are a good critique yourself. Yes, I feel like it is on the shorter side, yes it is quick paced in some points and slow in others, however the writing is quite beautiful. The sriting itself, that is.

Being completely honest what causes me slight conflict is the slight lack of story I perceived. I mean the words and sentence struxture were great but I just felt like it needed a little bit more story or plot to make it a distinctive and unique reaping. That is just my opinion, however.