Thread:PumPumPumpkin :3/@comment-5082922-20130925044624/@comment-5082922-20130925045828

And one last very minor comment for a tip. Remember to use signs correctly, it makes the page seem much more organized. I know I shouldn't be talking, as I my spelling isn't exactly like a strawberry shortcake on a white pony (what an odd simile...) but still, there was this minor thing I had correct on your pages, so here you go:

The colon-sign.

"Personality: Blah Blah Blah"

"Backstory: Blah Blah Blah"

A ":" is not used "Backstory : Blah Blah ".

A ":" has a space after it, but there is none before it.