User blog:Probably Salmon/Put in Chaos - A Divergent Fanfiction

Hi! So this is Eli (YourFavoriteSalmon) and Hannah (Probably Reading) and this is their Divergent fanfiction! You're probably going to be in this whether you like it or not :) (But in all seriousness, if you absolutely do not want to be in this just comment.)

Chapter I : The Bus Ride
Hannah Coldwell's Point of View (written by Hannah)

I sit on the bus to the Choosing Ceremony, and I fiddle with the charm bracelet on my right wrist. I really wish we didn't have to make this choice. Should I be Amity, or should I be Dauntless? My friends all live in Amity, and so does my family. But my heart truly lies in the bravest faction.

In case you didn't know, my name is Hannah Coldwell. I've lived in Amity my whole life, obviously, and now I am debating whether or not I should stay. I don't know what classifies as an Amity "look," but I have brown hair that reaches halfway down my back, and I have hazel eyes and pale skin. My mother was an Abnegation transfer, and my father was born here. So I really have traits from both factions.

The bus stops, and a group of Erudites get on. I stand up to allow one of them my seat; the Erudite are cruel and might take it anyway. Might as well give them my seat on my own terms rather than causing stress to them. A boy wanders to the back to see if there are, indeed, any seats. I stand up and start to walk to the aisle.

"Oh, no, it's fine," he smiles. I raise an eyebrow. Somebody's offering him a seat and he refuses to take it? He grabs onto one of the handles on the top of the bus.

"Are you sure?" I ask him, almost scoffing.

"Hey, can't you just accept that somebody's letting you have your seat?!" he says, a little sternly. Hmm. Seems like an Abnegation with a temper.

We reach the Hub, and I follow the crowd off the bus.